Shrink Magic ... Comfort Solution?

I've started working on this months ago when I was on a Final Fantasy XIII binge, and finally had the motivation to ink it. I don't have a decent enough program to attempt colouring it at the moment, so this may or may not be as much as I do on this. Who knows, I might finish it someday.

I tried a few new things here, such as the action lines. I like the idea of how it turned out, but I feel the lines tend to draw you from the edges toward the center of the picture rather than the other way around. As something should be moving toward the viewer instead of away from the viewer I probably should have made them shorter in the middle than I did, but ah well, I'm still learning the physics of it I guess.

This is the first mini-comic I've done, but I like these and plan on doing more of them. Not always just fanart though, I'll spare you.

If someone wishes to use this to practice colouring that is fine with me, I just ask that you hit me up with a link so I can see the finished work.

Characters are owned by Square-Enix

Can't wait for XIII-2 ^^